Sunday, 1 May 2016

golden wood

A golden piece of wood hides 
behind a white wall 
all alone.

It looks like a real piece of gold
ßut really has no value whatsœver.
 
Mistaken as the stone cold ore 
that made humans 
a lot more selfish.
 
Called GOLD. 


5 comments:

  1. I like the picture what a great poem also I like the part that said a golden piece of wood hids behind a white wall all along

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  2. Amazing poetry Luke and very wise.
    Mum

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  3. An amazing poem and very wise.

    Mum

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  4. Amazing poetry Luke and very wise.
    Mum

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  5. I agree when you say 'mistaken as the stone cold ore that makes humans a lot more selfish'. And (like I say in every comment I write, which is probably getting a bit boring) I LOVE the description! No, I really mean it this time! I know I say it EVERY time I write a comment, but this time I really mean it!!! Ok, I'm getting a bit carried away.
    You're really fantastic at writing! 😎

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